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Thank you, I appreciate that greatly :blob_teary:

Thank you very much for the review. I always like getting feedback on it, though I decided to finish it. Honestly, hearing the synopsis was a surprise. It's been so long that I've forgotten. Coming clean, when I first started writing, I relied on AI to edit my chapters so I could learn how to...

Hey Gabrielle, I absolutely love how you introduced yourself and would love for you to give my story a few remarks. I hope you enjoy it or at the very least find it interesting. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

Novel I finished but I always like getting feedback: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

This feedback is a work of art. But yeah, I've gone through so many revisions that anything unique or interesting got swept under the rug in favor of fitting the standards of writing since that was my weak point back then. Bullseye, indeed. Thank you for the feedback, truly. I forgot I even...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

Genre: Fantasy URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Feedback Level: One

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Thank you in advance :blob_salute:

That would be fine, I'm happy to get feedback in any way. Thank you in advance :blobthumbsup:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

2 is personal which I think will do better especially if you want your readers to feel your character's emotions.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ I've been told the story feels grimdark in the first chapter or two, but that derails quickly sad to say. (I am a grimdark enjoyer and am upset I did not stick with the genre.)

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate/chapter/1472144/chapter-1-natural-demon I'm still deciding where to take the story so any feedback would be great. Though if possible, I want to know your thoughts on the main character the most.