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AdiofBali reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread Are litrpgs modern pulp fiction? with
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I was bored and googling random stuff today (don't pretend you don't do it) and I happened upon a definition for "pulp fiction." They're... -
AdiofBali reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Editing Non-english writters. How do you know that you are written right for english language standars? with Like.
When the red lines disappear, you've done the ABSOLUTELY BARE MINIMUM. I consider this to be an absolute minimum requirement, and any...
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AdiofBali replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].So, I'm writing something like Ulysses but fully readable and mostly focuses on 1 PoV character. It's about an ex emperor god king...
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I knew those earlier nice reviews were you holding back. Let’s hear the unfiltered version now.
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Well, getting a character walking down the runway with their attire described immediately at the beginning did have me reaching for my...
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AdiofBali reacted to greyblob's post in the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
read up to: 30. Warning: Consequences this is gonna be a short one because i honestly don't have much to critique. overall, the writing...
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AdiofBali reacted to greyblob's post in the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again. i'll provide a simple review of...