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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2215390/the-crack-in-heaven/ Done with the tired flat progression system you've read about in the hundred last clone novels? You want a real power system that'll make you theorise, wonder, and dread Kael's choices, all without info dumps? This novel is for...

Sorry for the delay, I just just saw your answer. Thanks a lot for your encouraging words and the thorough review. :D I'll do my best to integrate your advice into my writing. Once again, I'm really grateful. Well, if you start with the last chapter, of course, you won't find it clear.

I've been writing my first book for a few months already but got really little feedback from readers. I'm at a point where I doubt everything I write, including in my second story. Therefore, I'd be grateful to have real opinions from you guys. It'll help me improve and fix the problems in my...