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omg yeah of course, don't worry! Just taking the feedback as a reminder there's a lot for me to learn regarding general dynamics and...

Oi. This is exactly why I don't sweat what readers think. Do your thing. Don't twist your characters to fit someone else's tastes or...

You know what a simile is, right? That "ant" line described her tone, not her dialogue. She is detached and robotic, as @Achillie...

The prose reads clean and accessible. I enjoy office romance, so there’s that. Although if I were to add one line of critique, it would...

Noted! My only knowledge on office politics is limited to my own observations through reading other office-setting stories and well, my...

Okay, derailed this thread too far. Let me get it back on topic. So the descriptions are sufficient for your genre, at least in my...

This looks interesting. I'll try reading it and give a feedback later. There are quite many popular non-fantasy stories on SH. Don't...

Incredible insight. I like how you say the voice is great and immediately suggest tweaking it. Anyway, this story looks adorable. Def...

That really is a relief for me to hear :blob_happy: at the end of the day writing consistently is the only way to grow here (and also...

Heyya, my story is set in an office, not a CEO x assistant/subordinate kind of story, just two normal co-workers falling for each other...

depends, if it's a story I'd imagine publishing traditionally one day, I'd write with hand so I won't edit the first draft while I write...