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@Achillie The part I particularly like in your story is that the opening paragraph goes straight to the point and encompasses the main... -
Achillie replied to the thread feedbacks for a simple office romance.Noted! Yup, I'll be reading more into office politics and how easy will it be to even be promoted, although as of now, my goal for the...
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Achillie replied to the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back).I was in the same sort of situation years ago, I had a thing for writing and making stories but had to face the reality that I needed to...
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Achillie reacted to Racosharko's post in the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back) with
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Achillie reacted to Fairemont's post in the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back) with Like.
Maybe go away from webnovels and grab actual novels. When I was your age, I read hundreds of them. Id suggest things specifically...
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Achillie replied to the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back).Everyone else has given their own criticism here so I won't point out the obvious. But, I'll give you a simple advice to add on. Read a...
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Achillie reacted to JayMark's post in the thread Can someone review my story (don't hold back) with Like.
You didn't use AI. You are struggling to learn yourself. And for that you deserve praise. Keep improving.
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Achillie replied to the thread What kind of music do you usually listen to when you’re writing something?.my music is silence usually but I did found some ppl say that minecraft ambient music helps with focus a lot, and very calming, I put it...
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Happy birthday to Me and tanenter ?????? I am 21 years old now!!! yaaaaaaaa But tanenter is only 15 years old. tanenter: Hey!!! That's...
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Achillie reacted to winterecho's post in the thread Can someone read my story [slow burn , female lead] with Like.
Hi everyone! I'm a new writer from Korea, and I've just started serializing my story here on Scribble Hub. If you love stories where a...
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Achillie reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It) with Like.
That is one form of "passive voice" and generally needs to be minimized or avoided in writing.
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Achillie reacted to LazyScript's post in the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It) with Like.
Just read your prologue! I'm pretty beginner as a author, so I hope you can accept my humble feedback (*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)ꕤ*.ﾟ First, the...
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Achillie reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It) with Like.
So, for the passion project of the novel, I'm trying to train my third person perspective and make it better. (I've been writing in...
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Achillie replied to the thread Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It).Just read up until chapter 2! Sigrún is funny I like her :blob_happy: Most of the stories I've written are in third-person with past...