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got it ?

i had tried to Fis chap 1 —hopefully reads smoother. If anything still feels off, I’d really appreciate your thoughts.

Thanks. I’m still figuring things out.

**“Hi everyone, thank you for taking the time to read my work. This is my very first attempt at writing, and it took a lot of courage to share it publicly. I didn’t expect praise or sympathy—just honest feedback that could help me grow. I know it’s not perfect, and I’m still learning, but I...

Hey, I get why it might’ve come off that way ?. I’m actually just a really introverted person, and I don’t socialize much — so posting this was kind of a big deal for me. I tried to sound clear and open, but maybe it ended up feeling too formal or stiff. I really do care about feedback and...

Hi everyone! its lily here I just posted the first chapter of my original fantasy story All the Strings Are Connected, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback — especially on emotional impact, pacing, and character interactions. I’m trying to balance humor with ache, and I care deeply...

Hi everyone! I just posted the first chapter of my original fantasy story All the Strings Are Connected, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback — especially on emotional impact, pacing, and character interactions. I’m trying to balance humor with ache, and I care deeply about how group...