"Hundreds of years since i have been home. hundreds of years since i seen the castles dome. hundreds of years since i sat on my throne."
"Yet today is not the day, In time of peace they do not need a warlord, in times of peace they shall not have blood." I said to myself as I lifted myself of...
Hello SailusGebels i'm back again. Can you read the new series i made called New World, Same Wars. I've tried to edit and improve my grammar on it. i know its better than my last one.
Be blunt on reviewing it. thank you!.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/803310/new-world-same-wars/
Sorry i haven't responded to you guys. been busy with many things. and a couple months ago i decided to redo or start a new story with the same goals i had in mind. I started writing again in early november. ill be posting my chapter in one of your review feeds.
It's fine. Everything has pros and cons, just this story has a lot of cons which i was unaware of.
edit: Before i continue writing, i'll be reading the sherlock holmes series to help improve myself
Sorry that it is bad i didn't prep for the story at all i just jumped in and started writing. i'm tired of being blocked by adhd on trying to make storys perfect. So i just pushed myself to write and ignore perfectionist side, too see if people would even try and read it and see if the story...
So you want a set and stone timeline, the only thing i can think of for a story for what you described is a sci fi/indiana jones type of thing
edit: like discovering long lost secrets in the past
Well if he can change the way time flows then it would be powerful as he can make a endless small loop cut off from the original timeline. but every time it does a 360 another timeline will be made smashed making another world and time playing at the same time in the same existence together...
Title: A new Era marches
Summary: The novel takes place in a very late renaissance era, on the brink of a world war (The story have not developed far enuf to know its on the brink of war.)
Synopsis:
A seventeen year old reincarnates as a third prince without any of the princes memory.
A small...
Hi. i've been looking for some feedback on my novel A new Era Marches, as this is my second attempt on making this novel as i did a creative writing approach to it than a thought out one. I Would like no sugar coating, hit me as hard as you can with the feedback as i will like to learn from my...
Can you review mine? I need a honest opinion on everything as this is my first novel so i trying to tune out mistakes and bad habits. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/801419/a-new-era-marches/
Edit: The first chapter was made to quickly so many details are left out.
I think it would be awesome if done right. like instead of a game lets say its a giant endless competition managed by cruel beings, or each teams made at random for a whole village were the MC grey up with and have feelings with them just to be forced to fight against each other in a ranking...