? Sleep deprivation makes me not be able to write ? I meant to write it keeps making me forget my release schedule ? how many of these mistakes have I been putting into my story editsssssss ?
:blob_aww: love this - thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate you taking the time! The first three chapters have been a sticking point for me on whether I paced it too slow or not, especially around Ch 2 where the stakes don't really align with the overall tension that's building.
I'd love to know what you think of my story!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1927716/under-quiet-skies/
It's a dark fantasy slow-burn bl... I think the first 3-4 chapters give the vibe for how the story would be. I rely heavily on dialogue to explain the world, and there's certainly some...
Hi! I'd love to get your feedback on the first 3-5 chapters of my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1927716/under-quiet-skies/
It's titled Under Quiet Skies - it's meant to be a slow-burn dark fantasy BL.
I've tried my best to avoid lengthy exposition and wanted to try and tell a...