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This is the link The Cruel Horizon

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Here I am again! You totally made me take a giant step back from writing... but hey, I appreciate it. I changed so much stuff—even my writing style and how natural my dialogue feels. I’m about to drop it again soon, but just wanted to pop in here and say, yeah, I definitely leveled up. Can’t...

Honestly just a review…what u think is lackluster about it…what parts about u like or didn’t like…

I really love to write... I really do. I try not to compare myself to others, and when people talk about how their stories are doing, I don’t feel jealous—I just feel sad. I love my story, and I just wish more people could see it. It doesn’t help that I don’t have much social media (I’m 20), so...

Not gonna lie, I love this! I'll come back later to get your opinion again. Thank you so much for taking time out of your day, but I will say this: I'm aware of the mundane start, and I know I have a lot I need to fix and work on. But by chapter 8, the fantasy elements start to make their way...

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Will do :)….Check in later this evening and let me know if it improved.

The Cruel Horizon https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1335211/the-cruel-horizon/

I have a problem. My genre is fantasy with sci-fi elements, but it has a slow start. I’ve already written and saved most of the lore and have been crafting this story for about two years. A week or so ago I decided to release the first couple of chapters. Could anyone please review it and let me...

I have a similar problem to his, but my genre is fantasy with sci-fi elements and a slow start. I’ve already written and saved most of the lore and have been crafting this story for about two years. Could you review it and let me know if it’s engaging? I’m okay with not having many reviews, but...