Is it AI?

[Abnormals]

I steadily walk toward the door as I can feel the subtle change in the room; my feet that once felt cold are now radiating the warmth never to be experienced by me. The moment of crossing feels like forever as the breath becomes heavier with each step to be taken - tell me is the given text by AI or Human

 

[Eldoria]

What is the importance of distinguishing whether it is AI output or human hand typing? What matters is what function the snippet of scene serves in the narrative. If it's just a blank scene that has no impact on the plot, it might be better to just remove it or make it more concise.

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

I steadily walk toward the door as I can feel the subtle change in the room; my feet that once felt cold are now radiating the warmth never to be experienced by me. The moment of crossing feels like forever as the breath becomes heavier with each step to be taken - tell me is the given text by AI or Human

Humie~.

 

[Abnormals]

Humie~.

is it yes or no

What is the importance of distinguishing whether it is AI output or human hand typing? What matters is what function the snippet of scene serves in the narrative. If it's just a blank scene that has no impact on the plot, it might be better to just remove it or make it more concise.

Well this is what my writing style , I use AI for grammar but not for writing and now i think i write like an AI and wish how to change it a little so it sound not like AI

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

is it yes or no

Well this is what my writing style , I use AI for grammar but not for writing and now i think i write like an AI and wish how to change it a little so it sound not like AI

It was humie~.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

Whether a piece of literature is AI is always arguable. However, whether it resembles AI writing is different.

my feet that once felt cold are now radiating the warmth never to be experienced by me.

For these specifically, I'm going to say yes it does resemble AI writing, because it makes no sense if we heavily analyze it.

This piece is told from a first person perspective, therefore, there is no way for the narrator to know that his/her feet are radiating warmth since he/she cannot perceive it, therefore it does resemble AI.

 

[Hoshino]

Well this is what my writing style , I use AI for grammar but not for writing and now i think i write like an AI and wish how to change it a little so it sound not like AI

Maybe, try instructing it to only fix grammar and not mess with your writing style-nya.

 

[Abnormals]

Whether a piece of literature is AI is always arguable. However, whether it resembles AI writing is different.

For these specifically, I'm going to say yes it does resemble AI writing, because it makes no sense if we heavily analyze it.

This piece is told from a first person perspective, therefore, there is no way for the narrator to know that his/her feet are radiating warmth since he/she cannot perceive it, therefore it does resemble AI.

how to improve to not sound like AI

Maybe, try instructing it to only fix grammar and not mess with your writing style-nya.

This writing is without even Ai grammar improvement - the current text is not even touched by AI because mistake can be resolved in small sentence without AI

 

[Racosharko]

how to change it a little so it sound not like AI

Read it out loud.

Think about how you'd tell a person a story, as if they are sitting next to you.

 

[Eldoria]

Well this is what my writing style , I use AI for grammar but not for writing and now i think i write like an AI and wish how to change it a little so it sound not like AI

There are many tools to check whether the writing is similar to AI or human handwriting, such as Grammarly. But that doesn't guarantee it was written by AI or not. In my opinion, the coherence of the writing is more important than whether it is AI-style or human handwriting. If the story is not coherent or just random, meaningless writing, then whether it was written by AI or human handwriting, it makes no difference.

 

[Abnormals]

Read it out loud.

Think about how you'd tell a person a story, as if they are sitting next to you.

There is a need of break between sentences , the warmth never to be experienced by me -to - I feel warmth , Something i never experienced before - this is the conclusion i came correct me if more too tell plz

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

how to improve to not sound like AI

This writing is without even Ai grammar improvement - the current text is not even touched by AI because mistake can be resolved in small sentence without AI

Make more sense? I already mentioned why it could be mistaken for AI writing.

 

[Abnormals]

There are many tools to check whether the writing is similar to AI or human handwriting, such as Grammarly. But that doesn't guarantee it was written by AI or not. In my opinion, the coherence of the writing is more important than whether it is AI-style or human handwriting. If the story is not coherent or just random, meaningless writing, then whether it was written by AI or human handwriting, it makes no difference.

sry but don't get it AI or human both produce bad writing and good also both take pacing and wording to its priority , both try to make a flow so what make them different

Make more sense? I already mentioned why it could be mistaken for AI writing.

So what needed is Imperfection that a make readers to feel human?

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

sry but don't get it AI or human both produce bad writing and good also both take pacing and wording to its priority , both try to make a flow so what make them different

So what needed is Imperfection that a make readers to feel human?

Clarity~.

 

[Abnormals]

Clarity~.

What is clarity in this area? I write what I feel from the eyes of a character, but now I read it aloud, and something feels distant, making clarity a term with a blurred meaning.

 

[Assurbanipal_II]

What is clarity in this area? I write what I feel from the eyes of a character, but now I read it aloud, and something feels distant, making clarity a term with a blurred meaning.

Purpose~.

 

[Eldoria]

sry but don't get it AI or human both produce bad writing and good also both take pacing and wording to its priority , both try to make a flow so what make them different

What differentiates them is their meaning. Writing is no longer just writing. In every story, in every arc, in every plot, in every scene, there is a meaning the author wants to convey to the reader. This meaning is what shapes the imagination in the reader's head and makes the story feel alive. If that meaning is arranged in scenes that are logically interconnected and consistent (coherent) within a storyline, it will produce a lively tale which has a moral message. And all of this is possible only through the author's creativity.

 

[Abnormals]

What differentiates them is their meaning. Writing is no longer just writing. In every story, in every arc, in every plot, in every scene, there is a meaning the author wants to convey to the reader. This meaning is what shapes the imagination in the reader's head and makes the story feel alive. If that meaning is arranged in scenes that are logically interconnected and consistent (coherent) within a storyline, it will produce a lively tale which has a moral message. And all of this is possible only through the author's creativity.

SO do i fullfill that area or not - how to check ( sry for the trouble)

 

[Eldoria]

SO do i fullfill that area or not - how to check ( sry for the trouble)

How do you check the coherence of your story? Well, I'm not sure just from that small scene. But you can check your story itself. What is the moral premise of your story? How do you write a conflict to answer your moral premise? How is your world constructed? Does your worldbuilding have consistent and narratively logical laws? Does your plot follow the laws of your worldbuildng? Does your storyline ultimately answer the story's central conflict? All of these must be arranged logically, consistently, and cohesively to form a complete story.

 

[Racosharko]

When you write, when you chew on the words you put on the page, ask yourself,
"where are the beats and sounds?"
"When does the words lift off the page, and your vision of what you describe tracks from one scene to another."
"When does dialogue sound real?"