Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

[Deleted member 1244]

feel clunky, artificial and that it doesn't flow very well...

when I feel, my dialogues are bad . I put on an accent and the some how.it all feels fine... @Alma, I dont know if that helps.

 

[Bochi]

Hail @Alma, writer of unintentional yaoi

 

[Deleted member 1244]

unintentional

Yes... "unintentional"

 

[Nahrenne]

... And this wording... Dear God, Alma, this looks so...

Lovely out of context quote, 10/10~

The homoeroticism is strong with this one.
*nods sagely*

hmm what do you call it when you gather stuff from a forest?

Harvesting?
Scavenging?

X

 

[Bochi]

The homoeroticism is strong with this one.
*nods sagely*

Harvesting?
Scavenging?

X

Homeless, maybe?

 

[Nahrenne]

Homeless, maybe?

Ah, I remember the word!

hmm what do you call it when you gather stuff from a forest?

Foraging!
It's called foraging.
'-'

X

 

[AliceShiki]

Character Sheet - Cizel

Rank Gender​ Male?​ Race​ Forest Man​ Level​ 1​ Age​ 32​ Class​ Fortune Telling?​ Money​ 15​ -​ Saving for a picture​ Appearance Cizel wears an animal mask and thick clothing, making it hard to deduce his gender. The clothes he wears has a tribals design of dark blue while his hair is that of a silverish purple color. Personality Cizel is the thinker when it comes to serious planning of a mission or a project he needs to complete. For otherwise he is unexpectedly a rather laid back individual, who will go with the flow however the situation is. Backstory Forest Man is a race that looks similar to humans but respecting the forest like elves, they normally live up to 200 years old. Their body will age like humans until 18 but will be considered as a teen until their 40'ies. They grow up in a nomadic lifestyle, are expected to learn about hunting and collecting the forest gifts. Their people are spread out in different tribes, guided by the star they believe in. As their race beliefs lay in the guidance of the stars, it isn't surprising that they believe their magic power also comes from the star. Cizel was born as a pure-blood, which means he has a gift for magic and therefore has also learned to do star divination. Those who are skilled in star divination will be able to guide each individual and even the tribe on a better pact for the future. One day, the stars told him that he needs to fulfill a trial, the destination lays somewhere beyond the sea. Later on, a boat was set out toward the sea but a storm sank the boat a few days later. Luckywise for Cizel, he survived the boat wreck. Due to his unfortunately circumstance and the stars guidance, Cizel decides to work in the Adventure Guild for money and perhaps the trial he was supposed to take. Inventory Skill Item Description Animal Mask​ A mask made by Cizel, is mostly worn for the tradition in his tribe.​ Damaged Tribals Clothes​ Warm and thick with some holes, how Cizel didn't sink to the sea bottom is a mystery... Skill Type Description Foraging ​ With a discerning eye for colors, Cizel can easily the right plant by seeing the colors alone Star Divination​ It can be considered as fortune-telling by other people

*glomps*

 

[Siostar]

Ah, I remember the word!

Foraging!
It's called foraging.
'-'

X

someone has told me, but thanks~

 

[Siostar]

*glomps*

what do you think of this character? XD

 

[Nahrenne]

someone has told me, but thanks~

Ah...okay...

X

 

[AliceShiki]

what do you think of this character? XD

Doesn't seem to fit you at all tbh, but... Have fun with him! ^^)/

 

[Siostar]

Ah...okay...

X

 

[Siostar]

Doesn't seem to fit you at all tbh, but... Have fun with him! ^^)/

which part? his kinda similar to me in some parts so it could be my word choice that doesn't match him lol

 

[Alma]

Yeah probably.

Also Read your character sheet. .

It's hard to do so on mobile... honestly.

 

[AliceShiki]

which part? his kinda similar to me in some parts so it could be my word choice that doesn't match him lol

I can't imagine you as a rugged old man! xD

 

[AliceShiki]

It's hard to do so on mobile... honestly.

Try copy pasting this:

[SPOILER="Ramza's Character Sheet"]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Character Sheet - Ramza Beoulve[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TD][RIGHT][B]Gender[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Male[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Race[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Hume[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Level[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]1 (0 / 200 EXP)[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][RIGHT][B]Age[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]19[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Class[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]White mage/Squire[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Money[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]0 G[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TD][IMG]https://static.zerochan.net/Ramza.Beoulve.full.125102.jpg[/IMG]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]

[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Personality[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]A squire in training and the youngest son of the great House Beoulve. Before leaving his home to become a mercenary, he was keenly aware of the difference in birth between himself and his illustrious half-brothers. He believes that justice shall not be found in fighting for his own sake but for the sake of others, and he hates those who would sacrifice another's life for any reason.[/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Backstory[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]A young man who appears in the tales of holy stones known as auracite in the distant world of Ivalice. Ramza is a mysterious warrior who left many questions unanswered, after his untimely death, regarding his role in the War of Lions, and his actions as a heretic. Born the third and last son of the noble house of Beoulve, he strove to uphold his family name by becoming a knight alongside his childhood friend Delita, eventually joining the Gariland Royal Military Akademy with him. However, when compared to his two half brothers who were already knights, he never considered himself worthy of the house name.

After the war, He retired from the life in battlefield. He devoted his life in the run as a white mage. With Alma beside him, he went around the world, helping others in need.

He changed when Alma went sick. It seemed that being the host of St. Ajora made her health deteriorate. Everywhere he looked, he couldn't find anyone who could cure Alma. Because of that, in desperation, he wished for her to be healthy.

The zodiac stones in his pouch reacted. Somehow, Alma was cured. But, he did not know if the being in front of her was Alma, his sister, or it was a lucavi. He was afraid, if the only way to move forward was to kill his sister.

It was then. He did not notice that his sister knew about his fears. She, using the magic Ultima, vanquished her own life. Not long after that, he found on her bedroom, about his nightmares.

His life was aimless after that. He felt dispirited after everything that happened to his life. One day, when he visited a tavern, he heard about a rumor of the gate to another world.[/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Inventory[/TH]
[TH]Skills[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Item[/TH]

[TH][CENTER]Description[/CENTER][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]White mage robe[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]A robe, adorned with red triangles around the edges, signifying his class as a white mage.[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]

[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH][CENTER]Skill[/CENTER][/TH]

[TH][CENTER]Description[/CENTER][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Shout
[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Using shout, Ramza aises his own reaction speed, speed, strength and Magic attack powers.[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Holy[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][I]White Magick that attacks the target with sacred light.[/I][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Cure
Brawler


Manafont
Regenerate[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]a white magick that healed wounds
Trained in the arts of the monk, Ramza can use the art of fighting barehanded to fight effectively
Absorb mana from the earth as he walked
A subconscious ability that used mana to heal when he is wounded[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[/SPOILER]

 

[Siostar]

I can't imagine you as a rugged old man! xD

Look at the background story!

 

[AliceShiki]

Look at the background story!

I read it! xD

Still doesn't seem to fit with you to me... >.>

But all is good as long as you have fun~

 

[Siostar]

I read it! xD

Still doesn't seem to fit with you to me... >.>

But all is good as long as you have fun~

For human years, he could be thought as 16 years old? tho he wouldn't act like one...

And I wouldn't say Lykke suited me much either?

 

[Alma]

Try copy pasting this:

[SPOILER="Ramza's Character Sheet"]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Character Sheet - Ramza Beoulve[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TD][RIGHT][B]Gender[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Male[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Race[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Hume[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Level[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]1 (0 / 200 EXP)[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][RIGHT][B]Age[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]19[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Class[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]White mage/Squire[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][RIGHT][B]Money[/B][/RIGHT][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]0 G[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TD][IMG]https://static.zerochan.net/Ramza.Beoulve.full.125102.jpg[/IMG]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]

[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Personality[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]A squire in training and the youngest son of the great House Beoulve. Before leaving his home to become a mercenary, he was keenly aware of the difference in birth between himself and his illustrious half-brothers. He believes that justice shall not be found in fighting for his own sake but for the sake of others, and he hates those who would sacrifice another's life for any reason.[/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Backstory[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]A young man who appears in the tales of holy stones known as auracite in the distant world of Ivalice. Ramza is a mysterious warrior who left many questions unanswered, after his untimely death, regarding his role in the War of Lions, and his actions as a heretic. Born the third and last son of the noble house of Beoulve, he strove to uphold his family name by becoming a knight alongside his childhood friend Delita, eventually joining the Gariland Royal Military Akademy with him. However, when compared to his two half brothers who were already knights, he never considered himself worthy of the house name.

After the war, He retired from the life in battlefield. He devoted his life in the run as a white mage. With Alma beside him, he went around the world, helping others in need.

He changed when Alma went sick. It seemed that being the host of St. Ajora made her health deteriorate. Everywhere he looked, he couldn't find anyone who could cure Alma. Because of that, in desperation, he wished for her to be healthy.

The zodiac stones in his pouch reacted. Somehow, Alma was cured. But, he did not know if the being in front of her was Alma, his sister, or it was a lucavi. He was afraid, if the only way to move forward was to kill his sister.

It was then. He did not notice that his sister knew about his fears. She, using the magic Ultima, vanquished her own life. Not long after that, he found on her bedroom, about his nightmares.

His life was aimless after that. He felt dispirited after everything that happened to his life. One day, when he visited a tavern, he heard about a rumor of the gate to another world.[/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Inventory[/TH]
[TH]Skills[/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH]Item[/TH]

[TH][CENTER]Description[/CENTER][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]White mage robe[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]A robe, adorned with red triangles around the edges, signifying his class as a white mage.[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]

[TD][TABLE]
[TR]
[TH][CENTER]Skill[/CENTER][/TH]

[TH][CENTER]Description[/CENTER][/TH]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Shout
[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Using shout, Ramza aises his own reaction speed, speed, strength and Magic attack powers.[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Holy[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER][I]White Magick that attacks the target with sacred light.[/I][/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Cure
Brawler


Manafont
Regenerate[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]a white magick that healed wounds
Trained in the arts of the monk, Ramza can use the art of fighting barehanded to fight effectively
Absorb mana from the earth as he walked
A subconscious ability that used mana to heal when he is wounded[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[/SPOILER]

Thanks!