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MidnightFox

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That makes things a little bit harder. Hmm... Oh, well, I'll just give readers hope that everything will be great and than hit them with cold and hard reality. :blob_sir:
Or just expand the relationship inside the family you could honestly just write a chapter of me and Enigma roping pixy into making alcohol or pastries, anything works I'm not good with slice of life but I'm sure it'll be a good read if you write it also what happened to the shashlik chapter it's been ages
 
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Or just expand the relationship inside the family you could honestly just write a chapter of me and Enigma roping pixy into making alcohol or pastries, anything works I'm not good with slice of life but I'm sure it'll be a good read if you write it also what happened to the shashlik chapter it's been ages
Life happened. The place where I work has got a lot of high-standing cr- campers to convict, so I'm spinning like a squirrel in a wheel. Well, and my laziness happened.
 

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To be honest I was thinking less drones and more like strapping guidance systems to metal rocks. If you think about it, clones are just biological drones anyways.
yeah when both are created maybe, but the experiences of the war will slowly change the clones just like in star wars and even in kriege corps in 40k i believe are clones i maybe wrong... they with the experience over the course of the war change
 

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yeah when both are created maybe, but the experiences of the war will slowly change the clones just like in star wars and even in kriege corps in 40k i believe are clones i maybe wrong... they with the experience over the course of the war change
That's true, but you can give drones a personality too. That way machines can also experience the wonders of PTSD
 

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That's true, but you can give drones a personality too. That way machines can also experience the wonders of PTSD
there is no fun if your machine dont have ptsd imagine popping a balloon near a roomba and it start to thrash your house
 
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:blob_hide: there is no way thats gonna work u know....
But mama loves potato salad :blob_hmm: Oh, Well... If this doesn't work I still have other methods :blob_evil_two:
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MatchaChocolate69

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Uh, yeah! That's right! My grand designs have no bounds, much like my intellect hehe :blob_uwu:<-head empty
? <- *watches her with admiration, imagining the complexity of the inscrutable grand plan*
A request thread already exists, do support it! Though Tony did say he'll add it by the weekend
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(It's already the weekend, so we can legally spam him :blob_evil:
I missed the thread, but I'll support it immediately with a +1.
Let's spam Tony until he implements them!
*graciously accepts headpat* :blob_uwu:
What a beautiful cat we have here! Who is the cutest cat in SHHS?
Of course, it's you!
:blob_evil:

I hope it doesn't get too warm... that would be bad :blob_shock:
Don't extinguish this fire! Make it burn even brighter! Even if I burn, it will be worth it. ???
"Unreal" is the point of the world outside the Droplets. There, Humans are eternal beings, meaning they have neither beginning nor end. Most appear as if they had always existed. Well, that might not be the case, but even after their first Awakening they are already somewhat mature and have knowledge no infant should, so some theorize that they just woke up after a long rest and have a "favored point in time" where they anchor their consciousness to. It causes some to doubt their existence (the MC of my WIP short story in particular thinks she might be in the afterlife). It'll be better explained in a book.

In a way, the setting is sort of an analogy for dream-like utopia where humans have no struggle and are free to exercise their creativity however they want.
Woah! So this is the "place" Heroine was referring to? No, it's different. But I see some conceptual similarities. It's interesting how one gets to this place. It seems like a kind of Nirvana, although, from what you say, the "self" remains. So, congratulations, it's something truly original and fascinating. I hope to read stories about it in the future.
A happy ending for you and me perhaps... the others? Not so much.
That is true... but in the end, the important thing is to be together.
P + spacebar(winrate, then combat start) has been ingrained into my soul so I can't associate it with the pause button. :blob_blank:
*new knowledge obtained* :oops:
Awesome! Canto II is probably the most criticized Canto since it's so goofy and the finale is sort of lackluster. Personally, I think it's great, so I hope you enjoy it too. It may be the last moment of happiness that the sinners will experience.
Although I haven't seen the ending yet, I can understand the criticisms. Certainly, the tone has lightened considerably for now. In the past, I was much more intolerant about it, foolishly. First point: to write a great tragedy, you must know how to write a great comedy. This is my belief, perhaps disproven, but I think that as writers, we need to master all human emotions and know how to evoke them in the reader. Second point: these fun interactions add three-dimensional depth to the characters, highlighting other aspects. For example, Sinclair's performance and how everyone backed out of dancing. It was funny, but most importantly, it gave me a way to connect with them and them a way to bond with each other. It's not easy to navigate these changes in tone, and I understand it might put some people off, but I believe that ultimately they make the drama that comes afterward stand out even more, and I'm so ready to receive it. :blob_popcorn:
Faust knows all outcomes, after all. Of course you would like her approach.
(It's honestly scary how much she knows. :sweating_profusely:)
I'll take inspiration from her when I need to write a character who knows everything. Additionally, I'm curious to see where things will go with her.
Oh yeah, poor poor Souffle.
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It honestly depends on who I'm with, if I'm with close friends I don't mind singing Take on Me like I'm reading an obituary... but when it comes to relatives and acquaintances, I can't help but feel a little self-conscious. >_>
I imagined the scene of Take on Me sung that way and I couldn't help but laugh. :blobrofl: I'm curious to know how the high note in "In a day or twooooooo" would sound! :sweating_profusely:
That is true by tonnage, but by number of ships it's the battle of Salamis(1k+ ships)

You can fit 9 earths in the moon's orbit around it... so even city sized ships seem insignificant. Though to be fair, I'm into futurism so I've seen concepts of ships The size of entire solar systems and even the size of multiple galaxies (can't find the link, but to be honest it's barely considered a ship and more of a moving habitat anyways)
Ah, the legendary Battle of Salamis! I love ancient history, and I still remember the pain of translating from Ancient Greek in high school... it wasn't my strong suit, but history was. I must say, the Greeks might have romanticized and exaggerated the numbers a bit. You know how it is, they loved to glorify their feats, and who am I to hold it against them? There's no compromising with epic tales.
However, despite being an impressive and legendary battle, we can't compare triremes with battleships, aircraft carriers, and cruisers. I think a more fitting comparison would be the Battle of Lepanto, also significant in numbers and strategy but with more modern concepts and the use of cannons. We're talking about 500-600 ships.

The concept of ships as large as solar systems or galaxies has its charm, but I don't think it's my cup of tea. I think the scale is too big. I didn't know about this series, Andromeda. It sounds interesting, though. I can't remember the last time I watched a sci-fi series. Maybe Battlestar Galactica? I'll note it down.
[はぁ, naval battles are a thing of the past. You only do them if you're absolutely certain you can crush your foe with overwhelming superiority! It's much more effective to launch an Alpha strike from your own base. Though I suppose I can understand the romance behind it all. This pathetic display was entirely superfluous, but I suppose it did satisfy the objective in the end. I look forward to see how they will inevitably lose!]
As always, you are right, my beloved! If they were more practical, they would have used their resources better, focusing on efficiency and minimalism. But you know, I'm a romantic! I wanted to stage a grand spectacle, and only with the superfluous can you make an event truly memorable, with embellishments and decorations that please the eyes and the soul. Admit it, you did enjoy this fireworks show I set up for you a bit! And maybe, yes, they will fail in their disjointed plan, but they'll do it with style and making a lot of noise.
[Please, there is little difference between a biological clone and a cold machine. If anything, one will not disintegrate when exposed to relativistic speeds before reaching their intended target. And if the former does, you would not be struggling so. And who says these machines are your troops? They are your ammunition, they don't even need to be smart! It's simply the principle of throwing rocks at the enemy scaled up to a stellar scale. Crude, but effective.

As for the suffering and struggle, they only matter for the main actors! All others are insignificant. Does the player of a chess game not fear the idea of loss? Do they not shiver at the mere thought of defeat? Won't the price be paid in blood be paid at the end regardless? An exemplary actor will find a colorful way to reach the Inevitable Truth through whatever means they deem fit. ]
Oh, my dear, your ruthlessness is what makes my heart beat fast for you! You reduce the essence of existence to mere utility, a crude calculus devoid of beauty. Yes, there may be little difference between a biological clone and a cold machine when reduced to their functions... but where is the poetry in that? Where is the grandeur that stirs the heart and elevates the spirit?
The infinite suffering of Theirl, endlessly repeated millions of times, Pixy's belligerence finally satisfied in an endless war she cannot win, forced to fight for something she does not believe in. Or Danny's children used as weapons, broken by the bond and love of their mother, here yes with the intervention of cold nanomachines? Is this not the perfect embodiment of Dante's inferno? Though touché, I must admit that what you say about the main actors is indeed true in the end.
It is indeed a compliment, you're welcome. :blob_evil_two:
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MatchaChocolate69

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That makes things a little bit harder. Hmm... Oh, well, I'll just give readers hope that everything will be great and than hit them with cold and hard reality. :blob_sir:
The lore of Matcha's past is not set in stone. What I wrote is more or less a rough draft. When I created the character for SHHS, I didn't expect things to escalate so much. :sweating_profusely: Let's say that if you need to change something about it, I'm open to adapting it. His past doesn't matter much in the end; what matters is that he is a flawed character.

Having a clone goofing of and a drone the drone really is more lack luster
Having both and forcing them to fight is funnier.
In the original idea, not yet completely discarded, I intended to bring in multiple units of Botty. For the moment, I've set it aside, mainly because I wanted to give Theirl a more significant role. Since he doesn't have any special abilities, I liked the idea of him being an infinitely expendable soldier, a sort of metaphor for human resilience.
However, some of Shizuki's drones do appear here and there. Maybe in the next chapter, I'll show some clashes between biological creatures and machines.
I just imagine a drone talking with a clone saying prepare im going to steal your job and the clone shooting it
The workers' revenge against the AIs! One could write a story about that.
yeah when both are created maybe, but the experiences of the war will slowly change the clones just like in star wars and even in kriege corps in 40k i believe are clones i maybe wrong... they with the experience over the course of the war change
This is an interesting theme I've thought about. I'm not sure if there will be space to implement it, but I'd like to. Can the clones acquire their individuality? Will any of them survive? If they had the chance to choose, what would they choose?
It all started as a joke, and now we're dealing with existential dramas. That's just me, I'm Matcha.
 

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I think I overdid it :sweating_profusely:
*picks up mama and carries him to bed*
*brings potato salad*
*moves potato salad close to nose and uses it as smelling salts*
:blob_hide: there is no way thats gonna work u know....
Ehehehehehehe~ potato salad~
But mama loves potato salad :blob_hmm: Oh, Well... If this doesn't work I still have other methods :blob_evil_two:
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Oi, I still need that thing!
What a beautiful cat we have here! Who is the cutest cat in SHHS?
Of course, it's you!
:blob_evil:
That is one of the most romantic things I ever read.
The lore of Matcha's past is not set in stone. What I wrote is more or less a rough draft. When I created the character for SHHS, I didn't expect things to escalate so much. :sweating_profusely: Let's say that if you need to change something about it, I'm open to adapting it. His past doesn't matter much in the end; what matters is that he is a flawed character.
I see. I want to show what exactly happened - at least in one of realities - what planted the first seed of flaw into Matcha's mind. Something he read, heard or seen. Maybe he saw how his mama was talking to an enemy of the Soviets. How SRB was doing bad things for the "greater good" of his country and thought that you need to live as an ultimate Big Bad if you want everyone else to be good.

Becoming a Villain, when somewhere, very deep down inside, Matcha just wishes the best for everyone. But maybe it's just me mixing the character and the creator...
 

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the demon are gone, the power remain. Runes has been modified to a collar, one singular collar. It cursed to stay in the body and even if changed clones the collar will follow the main consciousness so there that. Last Report 1 March ? UDC (Universal Date Calendar) just as the time I arrived at this cursed high school
 

SsemouyOnan

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? <- *watches her with admiration, imagining the complexity of the inscrutable grand plan*
:blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two::blob_evil_two:
I missed the thread, but I'll support it immediately with a +1.
Let's spam Tony until he implements them!
Apparently we need to wait for Monday before the gates open
What a beautiful cat we have here! Who is the cutest cat in SHHS?
Of course, it's you!
:blob_evil:
Uwah, really? :blob_dizzy: Don't tell Aaqil and BernKatstel then. (I would include Shizuki... but I doubt she cares about being the cutest unless it's Boi saying it)
Don't extinguish this fire! Make it burn even brighter! Even if I burn, it will be worth it. ???
Okay, here's a collapsing neutron star! >_o - ?
Woah! So this is the "place" Heroine was referring to? No, it's different. But I see some conceptual similarities. It's interesting how one gets to this place. It seems like a kind of Nirvana, although, from what you say, the "self" remains. So, congratulations, it's something truly original and fascinating. I hope to read stories about it in the future.
It is different, I have to make something that makes sense for the SHHS lore, after all. The thing that allows Humans to exist outside of the Droplets is a Spark, which grants them all their godlike abilities, and it's granted a name describing a power unique to them. I believe the Heroine's is the Spark of Imagination? Though that's only tentative. Ssemouy is never supposed to have one though, and it may or may not have been forced upon her by a certain someone.

Thank you, but I couldn't really call it original. It was inspired by a crack theory on Youtube about the Dreamlands about the Lovecraft Mythos. It said something like "Everyone exists in the Dreamlands, and beings in the material plane are just them existing as actors. They forget everything, so that's why they experience madness confusion whenever they see things outside of it - because they aren't supposed to see things akin to their true selves."
That is true... but in the end, the important thing is to be together.
So that's why you voted for me in the who deserves to be in jail thread... :blob_hmm_two:
*new knowledge obtained* :oops:
I believe that's what the keys were originally mapped to? You changed spacebar to pause though.
Although I haven't seen the ending yet, I can understand the criticisms. Certainly, the tone has lightened considerably for now. In the past, I was much more intolerant about it, foolishly. First point: to write a great tragedy, you must know how to write a great comedy. This is my belief, perhaps disproven, but I think that as writers, we need to master all human emotions and know how to evoke them in the reader. Second point: these fun interactions add three-dimensional depth to the characters, highlighting other aspects. For example, Sinclair's performance and how everyone backed out of dancing. It was funny, but most importantly, it gave me a way to connect with them and them a way to bond with each other. It's not easy to navigate these changes in tone, and I understand it might put some people off, but I believe that ultimately they make the drama that comes afterward stand out even more, and I'm so ready to receive it. :blob_popcorn:
Yep, the scene with Don completely changing her tone of voice was also memorable... which makes me question things since all of her fixer IDs become the director of an association. Do tell me what you think of Rodya once you finish the Canto.
I'll take inspiration from her when I need to write a character who knows everything. Additionally, I'm curious to see where things will go with her.

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You're in luck, the recent Canto and events reveal a lot about her... might take you a few months to get there though.
I imagined the scene of Take on Me sung that way and I couldn't help but laugh. :blobrofl: I'm curious to know how the high note in "In a day or twooooooo" would sound! :sweating_profusely:
I may or may not be tone deaf. :sweat_smile:
Ah, the legendary Battle of Salamis! I love ancient history, and I still remember the pain of translating from Ancient Greek in high school... it wasn't my strong suit, but history was. I must say, the Greeks might have romanticized and exaggerated the numbers a bit. You know how it is, they loved to glorify their feats, and who am I to hold it against them? There's no compromising with epic tales.
All the numbers in ancient records are a bit unreliable, yes. It should still be more than 500 though.
However, despite being an impressive and legendary battle, we can't compare triremes with battleships, aircraft carriers, and cruisers. I think a more fitting comparison would be the Battle of Lepanto, also significant in numbers and strategy but with more modern concepts and the use of cannons. We're talking about 500-600 ships.
Any force that has the energy to be casually spacefaring should have the capacity to construct spaceships as easily as triremes, if not easier. Just take into account the US' industrial capacity in WWII, now imagine if they had an entire asteroid field to tap into. Though I'm not sure if Shizuki is mining the Kulper Belt or just yoinked all her materials from earth.
The concept of ships as large as solar systems or galaxies has its charm, but I don't think it's my cup of tea. I think the scale is too big. I didn't know about this series, Andromeda. It sounds interesting, though. I can't remember the last time I watched a sci-fi series. Maybe Battlestar Galactica? I'll note it down.
Space operas certainly keep the scale low to make the stakes more grounded. Stories like Orion's Arm where you see spaceships of that scale treat civilizations as characters rather than individuals. Funnily enough, I've never sat down and watched sci-fi, only read. I just used Andromeda since it seems like a more popular example
As always, you are right, my beloved! If they were more practical, they would have used their resources better, focusing on efficiency and minimalism. But you know, I'm a romantic! I wanted to stage a grand spectacle, and only with the superfluous can you make an event truly memorable, with embellishments and decorations that please the eyes and the soul. Admit it, you did enjoy this fireworks show I set up for you a bit! And maybe, yes, they will fail in their disjointed plan, but they'll do it with style and making a lot of noise..
[A true performer would know how to set up a spectacle befitting a grand theater. This superfluous behavior only makes the fireworks dimmer from where I stand. Don't you think this performance is a bit lousy when you're up against the Eldritch? Why, had they not been shaken from the betrayal of one of their kin, I doubt any of them would have succumbed at all.]
Oh, my dear, your ruthlessness is what makes my heart beat fast for you! You reduce the essence of existence to mere utility, a crude calculus devoid of beauty. Yes, there may be little difference between a biological clone and a cold machine when reduced to their functions... but where is the poetry in that? Where is the grandeur that stirs the heart and elevates the spirit?
The infinite suffering of Theirl, endlessly repeated millions of times, Pixy's belligerence finally satisfied in an endless war she cannot win, forced to fight for something she does not believe in. Or Danny's children used as weapons, broken by the bond and love of their mother, here yes with the intervention of cold nanomachines? Is this not the perfect embodiment of Dante's inferno? Though touché, I must admit that what you say about the main actors is indeed true in the end.
[In the end, the clones are not connected in any way. Can it truly be said to be Theirl's misery, or the insignificant suffering of millions of background characters? Would not the despair that taints Pixy's heart when she comes across a force that her, as an individual, cannot even hold a candle to be painted blacker than any battlefield she may find herself in? As for the zombie daikons... I have no comments regarding them.

In the end, that too is true for the bot and SNVW - as each and every machine they connect to becomes a part of themself. Each loss, each inch closer to defeat would feel like their flesh being callously stripped from their bones. It can be said to be more colorful than the suffering of any biological being.]
 

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the demon are gone, the power remain. Runes has been modified to a collar, one singular collar. It cursed to stay in the body and even if changed clones the collar will follow the main consciousness so there that. Last Report 1 March ? UDC (Universal Date Calendar) just as the time I arrived at this cursed high school
Did Shizuki become a demon god while I wasn't looking? :blob_shock:
 
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