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TheMonotonePuppet

A Puppet Colored by Medication
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Do you all think I should edit and fix up the most recent chapter? Is it enjoyable or too confusing? It received fewer edits than the first one, and I was anxious to get it out before Anon sent out any more of his chapters and made the whole plan to start the Death games outdated.
 

Theirl

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Do you all think I should edit and fix up the most recent chapter? Is it enjoyable or too confusing? It received fewer edits than the first one, and I was anxious to get it out before Anon sent out any more of his chapters and made the whole plan to start the Death games outdated.
Well its good in my opnion
 

SsemouyOnan

Black cherry flavoured redshift
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Do you all think I should edit and fix up the most recent chapter? Is it enjoyable or too confusing? It received fewer edits than the first one, and I was anxious to get it out before Anon sent out any more of his chapters and made the whole plan to start the Death games outdated.
No need, it reads well enough. And most of the chapters in the novel aren't edited, part of the beauty really. It could make for some happy accidents :blob_hmm:*looks at Rhaps' chapter*
 

SRB

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His name is Archie. Archie the Axolotl :blob_evil_two:
He's very cute. I have another little guy myself, but I didn't name it, never had the chance.
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SRB

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Do you all think I should edit and fix up the most recent chapter? Is it enjoyable or too confusing? It received fewer edits than the first one, and I was anxious to get it out before Anon sent out any more of his chapters and made the whole plan to start the Death games outdated.
It's good enough, but at the time, Corty already lost the child.
 
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Well hello, Archie meet... I have yet to name the zombie daikon! :blob_shock:
Name him :blob_evil: I wanna know what to call him :blob_evil:
He's very cute. I have another little guy myself, but I didn't name it, never had the chance.
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:blob_aww: looks so cutee! Did you made it or your sister? :blob_aww:
@DannyTheDaikon mooooorrnnniiinnggg~
Good morning Your Stabbyness :blob_reach: I was not expecting you so early so I went to do some things :blob_reach:
 
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