Need feedback for my rewrite

Newbiereader123 said:

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

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Newbiereader123 said:

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

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FRWriter said:

First, you need to rewrite your request here ;)
Then you can take care of your novel.

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Bimbanana said:

Thou must weave a link within thy script for other souls to discover thee manuscript

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Newbiereader123 said:

Sure, I can do that. Honestly English isn’t my first languages so I will need many guidance. What would be your suggestion?

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Newbiereader123 said:

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

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FRWriter said:

Download Grammarly and fix your mistakes. If you create a thread and only write 2 sentences, you should make sure they are more or less fine. I see grammatical errors and a lot of spelling mistakes as well. That's not something acceptable for an author releasing English stories, so use tools to make sure your stories don't have that problem.

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Newbiereader123 said:

Errr I will mostly be typing from my phone for this. Can I use grammarly in safari?

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FRWriter said:

Yes, Grammarly works on mobile.

You can, of course, ignore it, but before you publish your chapters, you need to edit them.

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