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    Feedback for the first chapter of my story, "I'll **** the Germanness out of You"

    Thanks, I'm honestly surprised that you liked it. Yeah, it's a romance. I haven't read anything here so I'm new to this. I messed up the formatting on the first chapter because I was typing it into Claude but for the second chapter I decided to write it in a word processor first, I'll fix it.
  2. JaneBauBau

    Feedback for the first chapter of my story, "I'll **** the Germanness out of You"

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2351509/ill--the-germanness-out-of-you/ I'm a new writer and honestly I feel like my writing's terrible but Claude says it's fine so I don't know what to believe. Can anyone give me some constructive criticism or just validate how terrible I think it is? Yes...
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