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Their shields are so strong, NOTHING on Planet Earth, including HP spells, could break them. You could literally enter the jumper and...

Roflmao, you just got enough firepower, mobility, and defenses to blow up a fucking fleet with at least twenty to thirty motherships...

Images are too small. You have to zoom in like crazy to see anything. Also, not wanting to shatter your dream... who the hell wants...

Terrible. You could never turn this into a story without suffering through literal hell. So niche, so specific, so hard to write...

There are like thousands of programs capable of detecting spelling mistakes. He can use whatever online tool, site, writing program, or...

Nah, I saw what you deleted... you quoted yourself and double posted.

As a natural lefty, your left hand excuse means nothing to me. Feel shame for what you have done.

Aside from that, it's a cool story. Why not turn it into a short story? A couple of chapters would be enough.

This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though...

Uff.... Uff.... I like your goal. I read the first chapter, and I just want to give you my honest opinion, analyzing just this one...

To answer this question honestly, no. It isn't viable, even by light novel standards. @FRWriter already covered basically everything...

I think the LN style is not the main problem. You need to work on grammar... badly. Your sentence structure is not only awkward, but...

That's it. Using AI to correct Grammar and spelling mistakes is fine! A lot of people, including myself (through Grammarly), do it...

Pretty sure these stories were not deleted because they were mistaken as fanfics, but they were against the content guidelines...